How does my writing sounds?

You definitely have a broad and well-developed vocabulary. Your words are far-reaching and ; they are able to pierce into the deepest depths of the human soul and they easily evoke grandiose images in the mind of the reader. However, I do find a fault with your writing. You are too idealistic and you have an exaggerated focus on aesthetics. You are excellent at describing the atmosphere and setting, but yet you do not express any idea of transcendental value. But don't worry because you can get better at that with the years. All in all, you show an exceptional talent for your age. I shouldn't be so judgmental.